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Tuesday, April 10, 2007 @4:54 AM

Hm... Yesterdae i wrote mi veri first fanfic (story) and... Ngamun told me to promote by putting it in mi blog... Alot of people say they don't get the story!!! =( And I was reallie rushing... so there are not much details =X And i'm a newbie!!! Hehe... I'm going to write part 2 now... ...
Ps: If u dunoo... "Oppa" means elder brother ^^

Main Characters
Aki : 20 yrs old. A girl who is quite rich as her brother, Junho, is a boss of a six-star hotel and many famous shops. Her parents are overseas as they have other companies there. Also, she has a charming and caring brother, Junsu who is studying in the same school as her.

Junsu: 21 yrs old. He is known for his outgoing and caring personality. In addition, he is very popular among the girls as he is full of charisma.

Jaejoong: 21 yrs old. He is known for his cool and mysterious personality. His so called gang in school is feared by many students. Most students would try to avoid them and even bow at them. Despite being fearsome, many girls are attracted to cool and handsome Jaejoong.

Yoochun: 20 yrs old. He is the “nerd” in the school as he wears geeky glasses and is always bullied by many students. However, he is the famous superstar “Micky Chunnie”! His company has forced him to disguise himself in school to avoid troubles and rumours.

Yunho: 21 yrs old. He is a very good friend of Junsu and Changmin. Although, he is very good-looking and intelligent, he is rather flirtatious. In fact, he has a heart of gold as well.

Changmin: 20 yrs old. He is very close to Aki as they grew up together since young. He is very popular among his juniors as he is very funny and warm-hearted.

Part One
It was raining heavily. Yunho and Aki were standing in the rain, near the school gate. In the mean time, Junsu was driving his BMW, on his way to the school.
Yunho looked into Aki’s eyes,” I can’t stand it anymore. Let’s break…”
Aki’s eyes turned red and tears started rolling down her cheeks.
She held Yunho’s hands and said ,”Oppa, I’m sorry, did I do anything wrong? Or do you want me to change? Is it my attitude? Is it my looks? Isit my…”
Before Aki could finish her sentence, Yunho pushed her hands away. He was so annoyed that he said ,” Aki, listen! I’m sure you know we have no more feelings for each other! We’re together for like 2 years…”
Aki shook her head and covered her ears. She mumbled to herself, refusing to accept the reality. Yunho pat her shoulders and walked away, leaving her in the rain. Aki stood still and stared blankly. Her heart was aching so much that she could not even utter a word. At this moment, a car passed by her and stopped immediately. It was Junsu! He opened the red umbrella and dashed towards Aki. His eyes went teary the moment he saw Aki. Aki looked at him for a few seconds and immediately hugged him tightly. “Oppa! Oppa! Yunho Yunho…”uttered Aki. Junsu held her tightly and patted her head softly.

Aki sat on the sofa, all drenched. Junsu made a cup of hot chocolate for her and covered her with a thick towel.
Junsu said softly,”Yunho… he told me about it... You should know that he’s never serious in love relationships, so just…”
Before Junsu could even finish his sentence, Aki exclaimed,” Oppa, aren’t you and Yunho oppa best friends? You should know what type of girls he like right! Is it because I’m not sexy enough? Is it?”
Aki looked so hopeful that Junsu didn’t even know what to say.
When Junsu was about to explain things to her, Aki ran back to her room and locked it. Junsu knocked onto the door so many times, but she just ignored.

The next morning, Junsu woke up and saw a note which says “Oppa, I’m going to school early, you do not have to drive me today! Take care!” Junsu thought that she was already okay and so he left for school by himself.
At the very moment he reached school, Changmin rushed to him and screamed,” What happen to Aki? Why is she wearing super mini skirt and bare back top?” Hearing this, Junsu immediately rush to Aki’s classroom.

Aki was actually walking around the school’s field when she saw Yoochun being bullied by a few guys. Seeing this, she stomped towards them and asked them to get lost. Knowing that she is Junsu’s sister, they left reluctantly.
Aki helped Yoochun up and said,”Hey, are you alright?” Yoochun looked at Aki and dazed. This was probably the first time he felt this way. His heart was beating so quickly that he could hardly breathe.
“Yea, I’m fine. Thanks” he looked down, blushing. Aki smiled at him told him to be careful of those bullies. Yoochun kept looking at his shoes, and all he did was nodding. As the atmosphere was quite awkward, Aki waved at him and left.
On the way to the classroom, she saw Yunho walking towards her. She was elated, thinking that Yunho would patch with her.
“Yunho oppa…”said Aki.
“Why are you wearing like this! Everyone is saying that I force you to wear like this! What do you want from me?!?!” shouted Yunho.
“… I… I thought you would like this…I thought…” said Aki.
“You thought!? I don’t like it at all! Don’t you get it? I have no more feelings for you. So please stop pestering me alright!” roared Yunho.
Aki felt hurt but she was angry as well. She did so much for Yunho and yet she got a scolding instead.
Suddenly, she saw a guy walking pass her and began grabbed his arms. It was Jaejoong!
“U-know Yunho! You’re not as important as you think you are! This guy here, he is my boyfriend alright! And he is a million times better than you!”screamed Aki.
Yunho stared at Jaejoong and stomped away.
“Miss, do I even know you?” said Jaejoong. And so, Aki told Jaejoong the whole story. Now, she was angry instead of sad. Jaejoong was pitied her quite abit and decided to act as her boyfriend for the time being.

As Jaejoong and Aki walked together, people wear staring and pointing here and there. They must be wondering who’s that “lucky” or maybe “daring” girl walking beside Jaejoong.
Seeing them together, Junsu and Changmin looked more surprised than anyone else.
“Where have you been? We’ve been looking for you!” said Junsu.
Aki looked at Jaejoong and said;” Oppa, this is Jaejoong oppa, he’s my new boyfriend!”
Hearing this, both Junsu and Changmin stoned, especially Changmin. He thought that he would stand a chance since Aki is single now. *Changmin liked Aki for more than 10 years but he has not confess his feelings to her.*
“Oppa, changmin, why are you guys so surprise?” asked Aki.
Changmin wanted to say something but Junsu hit him and said,” Oh, nothing! I’m glad that… that you have a new boyfriend. Junsu forced a smile and dragged changmin back to their own classroom.
“Hyung! That is Jaejoong! It’s Youngwoong Jaejoong for goodness sake!” said Changmin.
Junsu tapped Changmin’s shoulder and sighed,” She’s old enough to think. She knows what she’s doing. Let’s not interfere.” Changmin could see that Junsu was feeling just as bad as him.

Few days later….
It was late at night and Aki just reached home.
“Aki… you’re home late again…” said Junsu.
Aki stuttered,” Oh I have projects to do…sorry oppa”
Junsu just nod his head and went back to his room. He knew that Aki was lying, he knew that Aki was actually out with Jaejoong. Ever since, Jaejoong and Aki were “together”, Aki didn’t talk to Junsu as much as she did last time. Junsu was feeling really upset but Aki didn’t know.
When Aki was about to go into the bathroom, she heard a knock on her door. She opened and saw Junsu outside. His eyes were teary and he was looking very depressed.
“Oppa… are you okay?” said Aki.
Suddenly, Junsu hugged Aki and held her tightly. Aki was really startled but she did not say anything.
“Aki… do you wanna be with me?” Junsu asked softly.
“deh?” said Aki.
“I like you alright! Can’t u feel it at all???!” exclaimed Junsu. Tears were rolling down his face and he was stuttering.
Immediately, Aki pushed him away and said, “Oppa, what are you talking about? We’re siblings, aren’t we?”
Junsu grabbed her shoulders and shouted,” No, we’re not! We’re not! I’m not your biological brother! I’m adopted okay, I’m adopted! We have not relationship!”
Hearing this, Aki’s mind was in a blank. She could not believe the truth.
Junsu let go his hands slowly and said,” You can’t believe it right? Me either… I just knew about this a few days ago…” He kneeled down and lied flat on the ground. He was so tired that he looked as if he was about to die.
Aki shook her head and ran out of the house. She strolled and realized that she was actually outside Jaejoong’s house. After much hesitation and pondering, she rang the bell. Jaejoong opened the door with his shirt unbutton.
Aki said softly,” Can I come into your house…?”
“Deh? Uh…” mumbled Jaejoong.
Aki looked into the empty house and saw a woman on the sofa. Immediately, she walked away. At this moment, Jaejoong grabbed her hand and said,”Wait here.” Jaejoong went towards the woman and whispered to her. Suddenly, the woman gave him a tight slap and stomped out of the house.
“Come in… Are you alright? What happened?” Jaejoong asked calmly as he took a glass of water from the kitchen.

Part 2 will be coming soon... How was it... COMMENT okie!!! lol~

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-Super Junior
-listening to songs
-day dream
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-go youtube
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[x]DISLIKES[x]
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-stress
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